Snippet Sunday 1/4/15

This is from “Why Moore.”, a WIP. I’m toying with different POV, and I’m having a hell of a time with it. Can I get some feedback on how a POV is chosen?

Nancy was standing next to her sister; both looking down at their mothers body. in the casket. Nancy’s sister asked, “Did you love her Nancy?” It was hard for her to respond truthfully, but she tried to answer as truthfully as she could. “I didn’t love her, I tolerated her. I wish, well no I really don’t wish you knew all the things that mother put me through. And of all times to discuss our problems, this is not the right time.”

Stay tune next week when you’ll hear the crazy witch holler “WTF!”

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